~ Dawn ~
In the morning hush, under clouds of blush
love stirs and stretches, in no rush
coffee for two, balcony with a view
just leisure kisses to pursue
Moments of glory, love's inventory
just the beginning of our story
a future to fill, with touches that thrill
endless moments where time stands still
Because you knew that our love was true
and because I am one with you
our hearts will endeavor to beat forever
as body and soul, we come together.
© Dahlia Ramone: September 12, 2015
This was written for Blogophilia Week 29.8
Topic: Because I Am
Bonus Points:
(Hard, 2 pts) Play an online game (I didn't)
(Easy, 1 pt) Include the words:
'self-praise is no recommendation' (I didn't)
Taking stock of this fine poem, I find so much to adhere to...
ReplyDeleteLike the inventory you subtly allude to, this relationship is potentially perpetual.
Perpetual. I've always liked that word ;)
Delete<3
Sounds like a candy crush to me! And isn't doing the blogo an online game? Winks
ReplyDeleteNice piece, D! :)
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lolol! I guess Blogo is kinda like an online game - never thought of it that way before. Thanks, dollface ;)
DeleteLovely piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Christopher :)
DeleteSounds like heaven...your words paint a rich and lovely visual :)
ReplyDeleteIt's how I imagine heaven would be. Thanks, C - your feedback always means a lot to me <3
Delete*sighs*
ReplyDeleteYep. *sighs*
DeleteTerrific write
ReplyDeleteStormy
Thanks, Stormy :)
DeleteBeautifully done!
ReplyDelete5 points Earthling! :)
Marvin
Aww, thanks Martian Dude :)
Delete*sigh* Dollface, you always write the most romantic poems!
ReplyDeleteIrene
*Smiles* I was inspired. Thanks, dollface (((hugs)))
DeleteNothing at all wrong with romance in one's life! Very nice poem!
ReplyDeleteIt's always nice when romance makes an appearance ;) Thank you, and (((hugs))) to my favorite blue dude <3
DeleteOh so lovely.... David II...
ReplyDeleteHey stranger! How have you been? I've missed you...
DeleteVery lovely piece! :)
ReplyDelete~~Diana
*Smiles* Thank you, Diana :)
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