~ Follow Me ~
If I told you
that I couldn't promise the sun would always shine
but I could promise you would always know warmth
my love like warm amber on an onyx night
would you follow me?
If I told you
that I couldn't promise the moon would always come out
but I could promise my heart would always shine
lighting the way for you
would you follow me?
If I told you
that I couldn't promise when the wind blows, it won't bite
but I could promise you shelter
wrapped up in my arms
would you follow me?
If I told you
that I couldn't promise some days won't taste bitter
but I could promise that life together would be sweet
and that we would always crave each other
would you follow me?
I will seek out beauty to share with you
but when it hides, dancing just beyond the shadows
I can strike up music of our own
you will still feel the warmth, see the light
feel the breeze and taste the love
if you will follow me.
© Dahlia Ramone: October 4, 2015
This was written for Blogophilia Week 33.8
Topic: Shadow Dancing
Bonus Points:
(Hard, 2 puts): Incorporate the title of a James Patterson novel
("When the Wind Blows")
(Easy, 1 pt): Include a birthstone (amber, onyx)

That song and the poem reminds me of a high school girl friend. Thanks for the write.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad I could help provide a memory. You're welcome ;)
DeleteI would be happy to take care of these things. You just go about the business of being you.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it's tricky business being me, I keep getting in my own way. But, I'm learning ;)
DeleteThanks, dollface <3
Sigh... simply beautiful xx
ReplyDelete*Smiles* Thanks, Sharonlee. It's good to see you :)
Deletewow this is just so very very beautiful....Lisa!!! Every thoughtful word resonates a deep and unconditional love.
ReplyDeleteThanks, C - "unconditional" is how love should be :)
DeleteLOVE IT! Love the tune, love the write and you! So as you know, you'd never have to ask me these questions, it's safe to assume you're not writing about MEEEeeee! lmao!
ReplyDeleteLolove you!
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lol Eric, you're such a doll. I'd like to think these are rhetorical questions I wouldn't need to ask my muse either ;)
DeleteYesssss. I would follow you!!! Lovely write. Lovely writer. Huggs!!! - Leta
ReplyDeleteAwww Leta - thanks, dollface. Love you!! (((hugs)))
DeleteNicely done! Loved the video as well a blast from the past.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Laura. And I hadn't heard that song in ages myself until recently :)
DeleteI am following you...NO DON'T TURN AROUND!
ReplyDeleteI follow your writes whenever they are written!
8 Points Earthling! :)
Marvin
lol! *Silly Martian* I am glad you are following me, I'll always leave trails to my writings ;)
Deleteso very beautiful and the video is perfect
ReplyDelete*Smiles* Thank you, Linda. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
DeleteOh my God! This is so delicately and sublimely beautiful.... Yes, yes, yes, this is how true love should be. I just love your poetry, this piece speaks to me and warms me up on a cold autumn evening. Thank you ((((DOLLFACE))))! Love ya!
ReplyDeleteOh, your comment makes me so happy, Colleen - especially when I value and respect your own writing so much, you always write poetry that I can really feel. Love you tons!! (((hugs)))
DeleteYou are such a romantic! I was half expecting a Halloween poem, but this is much better! :)
ReplyDeleteI hadn't even thought about writing a Halloween poem - lol! But yeah, I guess the romantic in me has some pretty deep roots ;) (((hugs, dollface)))
DeleteLoved it - hard to imagine anyone say no to an offer like that.
ReplyDeleteI suppose we shall have to wait and see ;)
DeleteI used to follow you, but now I think I'm just 'subscribed'. It's hard to tell, let alone remember, when you're a true blond! You do leave pretty 'footprints' for us, though! :-)
ReplyDeleteWell, I don't remember things all the time, and I'm not blonde so I don't have that excuse - lol! Thank you for subscribing, though, and I'm glad you're enjoying my 'footprints' :)
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDelete*Smiles* Thank you, Sallon :)
DeleteWow! You never fail to amaze me with your poems, Dollface. You take the cake with romance-type poems.
ReplyDeleteIrene
I just write about dreams I'd love to live. I figure if I write enough, one of these days something good will come of them. Thanks, dollface :)
DeleteSo very beautiful. I love it!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it, Barbara - thank you :) (((hugs)))
DeleteWhomever had better follow you..Such a lovely poetic invitation
ReplyDeleteStormy
*Smiles* Thanks, Stormy. I hope he does ;)
DeleteSuch a glow here, how beautifully executed! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Poppy. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
DeleteThis is beautiful!
ReplyDelete~~DJ
Thank you, Diana, I have a good muse :)
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