Sunday, September 13, 2015

A simple love story

 
"Those tomorrows waiting deep in your eyes
in the world of love that you keep in your eyes
I'll awaken what's asleep in your eyes
it may take a kiss or two"
 
(excerpt from 'what are you doing the rest of your life')


~ a simple love story ~

Fervent wishes make haste in the sky
blowing in the wind, deliver or die
heart in a lurch, awaiting reply
poised to stop, if it all goes awry
 
All on the table, as the sun sets
time slips away while the moon frets
was it enough? Besieged by regrets
should have done more, lest he forgets
 
'Call me' she whispered; though barely a sound
her plea was felt from miles around
she thought herself lost, but he knew she was found
he emerged from the shadows as doubt ran aground
 
'Silly girl' he chided, 'why can't you see
you are the sun and the moon and the earth to me
tomorrow is waiting, so if you'll agree
we'll just slip away now, content as can be.'
 
His eyes met hers, so she'd understand
she saw, reflected, what Fate had planned
with a smile and a laugh, she took his hand
knowing their future together would always be grand.
 
 © Dahlia Ramone: September 13, 2015
 
 
 
This was written for Blogophilia Week 30.8
Topic:  Call Me 
 
Bonus Points:
(Hard, 2 pts) Incorporate a lyric from Peggy Lee
(excerpt above, from song in video
Not Peggy Lee, but hey - she covered it too)
(Easy, 1 pt)  Include the phrase "blowing in the wind"
 
 
 




19 comments:

  1. Oh I just love a happy ending... and the best is yet to come... Uplifting love poems will always be the order of the day, such as this one.

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    1. It was rather fairy tale-ish, and it just kind of wrote itself ;)

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  2. love the romantic whimsy of this happily ever after fairytale :)

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    1. I felt the fairy-tale vibe about halfway through writing this, then I couldn't stop thinking about the Princess Bride - lol! We should watch that movie together next time I come down there ;)

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  3. So quick! And so perfect!! 8 points, Earthling!! :)

    -Marvin Martian

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    1. Yeah, I don't think I've posted so quickly in a while, Marvin. Guess I was inspired that morning ;)

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  4. Lovely - always been a big fan of the Fates

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    1. Yeah, they always seem to know, don't they? Thanks, Tyler :)

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  5. This is just absolutely exquisite, (((DOLLFACE))))!!!!! Your muse has certainly sparked a dreamy and romantic write, which I adore. Love you! <3

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    1. Aww, Colleen - thank you so much. You know how much I value your input :)

      And yes, my muse has me feeling quite romantic lately <3

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  6. Beautiful! Romantic and made me smile :)

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  7. So beautifully romantic. I love it!

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  8. Love stories are never simple. But I do like yours!

    blue fool

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    1. lol! They should be simple, but aren't always. I like this one too :)

      Thanks, Blue Dude <3

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