Saturday, August 29, 2015

and they wished for 'forever'...

“The Kiss” Auguste Rodin, 1889

“Give me a kiss, and to that kiss a score;
then to that twenty, add a hundred more:
a thousand to that hundred: so kiss on,
to make that thousand up a million.
Treble that million, and when that is done,
let’s kiss afresh, as when we first begun.”
~ Robert Herrick ~

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In the span of a heartbeat
our past and future met
dancing circles around the stars
for the universe to behold

we became the reason
that time dared not exist
while sun and moon promised
to always come out when we kissed

‘forever’ was a lullaby
whispered on the breeze
its meaning held as lovers meld
and hearts and souls unite

and we will look back
to a hundred years ago
to the first kiss, and the tenth kiss
and the kiss where we lost control

to idyllic sighs and all love implies
we’ll think “those were the days”
but in the span of a second heartbeat
our future again unfolds.

© Dahlia Ramone, August 28, 2015



This was written for Blogophilia Week 27.8
Topic: Those were the days

Bonus Points:
(Hard, 2 pts) Incorporate a quote or line from Poet Robert Herrick
(Easy, 1 pt) Use the words “remote control” (I didn’t)





23 comments:

  1. If I was ever to dream, I would hope to dream of kisses; not just of those centered, but near misses; kisses under the stars, or if I might, kisses under hallowed moonlit night; but I know, if it was you, I would get if right.

    If I was to dream...

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    1. Awwww, Michael. What you've just said, is a poem in and of itself. Love you madly <3

      "If I was to dream" - sounds like you've got the title to your next poem ;)

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    2. How about, you just dream a dream and allow me a token Cameo appearance?

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  2. Wow....so very very romantic and deep. Loved it. I also love that Herrick quote you found...fits perfectly, the song too!! Love where your new muse is taking you!! xo

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    1. Thanks, C - the poem pretty much wrote itself yesterday, thanks to some great imaginings going on in my head :) Herrick didn't have many quotes that I cared for, but I just loved this one. In fact, I wrote my fourth stanza first, after reading it - lol! And I've been waiting on an excuse to use that song. *dreamy sigh*

      Gotta love that new muse ;)

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  3. *sigh* as true love should be....this is so romantic!

    Irene

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    1. A love to base all loves on. Yep. *sighs*

      Thanks, dollface :)

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  4. I still haven't written mine yet but I had that quote in mind to use. Your words capture the essence of love and all the frilly benefits. Absolutely brilliant, and soooo romantic!! Loved it dollface!! Leta

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    1. I almost didn't write anything this week, but I saw that quote and knew I couldn't pass it up. It's really so beautiful.

      Thanks, dollface. I really enjoyed writing this one :) ((((hugs))))

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  5. So beautifully romantic. I love it!

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  6. There is nothing like a romantic kiss or one that contains my favorite chocolate. I dream of both..nice write
    Stormy

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    1. Mmmmm....chocolate kisses sound yummy. Thanks for stopping by, Stormy ;)

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  7. beautifully romantic , very nice write

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  8. Oh my!!! This is jam packed with romantic love and it kind of reminds me of a certain Venusian gal that once captured my heart..... *sighs deeply* This is simply beautiful, dollface! 8 points, Earthling! :)

    - Marvin Martian

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    1. Ooopsy!!!! My bad... I was so overwhelmed by your poem that I awarded you the entire 8 points and just noticed you pointed out you did not use "remote control...." so unfortunately it is actually SEVEN points, Earthling. Sorry for my rushed comment!!!! :D

      - Marvin Martian

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    2. Awww, thanks Marvin. I was dreaming of romance when I wrote it ;)

      And no worries about the points - lol! I'll never have that jacket anyway :D

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  9. the kiss we lost control.... *sighs* miss those days of just going for it

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  10. Never "just going for it" was always my problem. Or, maybe I was just always in survival mode. But, I'm learning to just jump ;)

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